I've completed a first draft of my space opera novel, Torchship. I'm looking for a few people to give it a read and give me feedback on how well it works--does the plot make sense, are the characters real, and so on (finding typos is appreciated but not what I'm worried about right now). The key response I need is if you didn't finish it, where did you stop? I can supply most ebook formats.
A captain who'll take any job if there's enough money in it. A pilot with an agenda of her own. And a mechanic with an eye on the pilot. The crew of the Fives Full are trying to make enough money to keep themselves in the black while avoiding the attention of a government so paranoid it's repealed Moore's Law. They're not looking for adventure in the stars . . . but they're not going to back down just because something got in their way.
If you're interested, please leave a comment with your email and preferred format. Thanks!